Introduction: In July 2017, in response to a reader who wrote, "examples would help a lot to clarify!", I answered:
"It's a problem. I could find hundreds of examples of what I consider 'bad' photography, easily, but how could I present them? If another person's picture is used as a subject of a critique, it's legal under Fair Use (probably—Fair Use is never 100% certain), but I'd have to be taking someone's work and holding it up as a negative example. As a normally courteous person I have trouble with that idea. I wouldn't like it if that were done to me. Over the years I would have loved it if I could have put up pictures I find on the Web to discuss—many pictures of many kinds, to discuss in all kinds of ways. But I just don't think it's polite to do that to the people the pictures belong to.
"It's a big difference between the Web and a classroom. In the privacy of a classroom you can use specific pictures as examples, easily. But I have a problem with doing the same thing here."
Back to now: I've decided that perhaps I can do that with pictures that the makers have donated to be more or less rights-free on Wikimedia Commons. So from time to time I'll look for pictures there that illustrate various principles we can talk about.
But please, I am NOT ridiculing the photographs and certainly not the photographers! I have made every mistake under the sun, as all of us have. On the contrary, I thank them for letting us use their pictures for discussion.
Here goes.
A quiz: What basic mistake did the shooter make in the following picture? Think about it for a minute before you click through.
Anna Anichkova, "Rolls Royce" (fragment), Vintage Car Rally, Aphrodite Hills Resort, Cyprus (CC BY-SA 3.0)
The answer is that by moving camera position either just to the right or just to the left, she could have highlighted the iconic Spirit of Ecstasy hood (bonnet) ornament against the sky. As it is, it gets confused with the tree in the background and you don't see it very clearly. It's not outlined as it would have been if the photographer had placed it against the clean background.
In composition this is called the "figure to ground relationship," where figure = what we would call "the subject" and ground = "background."
First point: in emphasizing or de-emphasizing anything, give a thought to its importance. When I was house-hunting back in Waukesha, I was puzzled by the fashion in interior decorating (in the Midwest at least) of putting a band of decorative wallpaper on the walls of a room up by the ceiling. Why in the world would you want to draw attention to the right-angle meeting of the wall and the ceiling? Maybe sometimes it works, but generally it's like putting bunting on a garbage can. You want to draw the eye to the things you want people to notice, not just scatter spaces with decor indiscriminately. (No offense to anyone whose house is decorated in that fashion—it's a matter of taste, and you're welcome to not agree with mine.)
It's a good principle for both shooting and processing: draw the eye's attention to the significant parts in the picture, and de-emphasize the parts that don't matter (back in the days when digital files needed to be sharpened, I would only sharpen small areas of most pictures—the parts that were important and that I wanted people to look at). In a picture of a Rolls-Royce grille, the hood ornament is important! Especially when the figure-ground relationship can be corrected so effortlessly.
Film B&W photographers learned this early because of something called "tonal mergers." Let's say you're taking a picture of a telephone pole that's been painted pink. From where you're standing, part of the background is pale blue sky and part is dark pine trees. You can't be fooled by the "color contrast" of the pink against the blue if you know that they will be rendered on your film as the same tone of gray. In B&W the tone of the pole would merge with the tone of the sky and the pole would get lost. So you take a step to one side to change the angle and put the pole in front of the dark pine trees. You learned that you had to use contrast to delineate, isolate, and clarify the things you wanted to show. This becomes second nature after a while.
In this Athenian terracotta amphora from the late Archaic period, at the Met, attributed to the artist known as the Berlin Painter, the color of the clay is the figure and the applied solid black area is the ground
In Untitled 1956, from the Whitney (the original is 9x12 feet), the color field painter Clyfford Still plays with the tension between figure and ground, as he does in most of his work
Second point: Small changes in camera position can make a big difference in photographs. A way to practice this is that when you're out and about, take your picture as you normally would, but then occasionally take a few minutes to study the composition you just made through the viewfinder and play with the way the various figure-ground relationships are affected by small changes in camera position. If you've ever watched a master street photographer working and noticed how she seems to be doing a sort of zany tai-chi dance, contorting herself into odd positions in slow motion, chances are good you're watching her make small changes in camera position that make a big difference in her picture (which of course you can't see). Learn to play with that from time to time—it loads your mental computer with lots of good programming about small refinements of standpoint.
Practice
You want this to become second nature. Of course, I'm a teacher-type, and thus also a student-type, and you might not have the same temperament; but I think it's good to get out and practice this every now and then. Take and hour or two and go out specifically looking for things to photograph that you can either confuse with a background deliberately or isolate from the background deliberately—or—best idea—both, in two similar but different pictures with just a small change in standpoint. How do you create contrast between the thing you want to emphasize and its ground? It can be color contrast or tonal contrast.
Approach it in the spirit of play rather than like it's "work."
Or, get out a few photobooks or go to a photo sharing site and look through them looking for examples where the photographer used figure-ground contrast in some way to bring the viewer's eye—your eye, that would be—to what he or she wants you to see. You'll find examples everywhere. Or look for situations where the photographer missed that particular trick. You'll see a lot of that, too.
If you're not already well aware of this consciously, and if your experience parallels mine, I think you'll be surprised at how quickly this starts to affect your approach to shooting. You'd see that Roll-Royce composition in your viewfinder and just take that quick little juke to the left or the right, and place the Spirit of Ecstasy intentionally, and, as my parents' generation used to say, Bob's your uncle.
Mike
(Thanks to Anna Anichkova)
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Thank you for this.
A few examples of B&W done well or not would be useful, although I get it that online jpgs may limit the illustrative value.
Posted by: Robert Roaldi | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 12:21 PM
Yeah! Thanks for this type of instruction!
Posted by: Eliott James | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 12:57 PM
Mike - I agree with your point of view completely. But I would go even farther.
"Figure ground" relationships are a two way street - they affect each other, thus the problem with the image may be figure, ground or both. In the case of the RR I think we have the latter. Shifting solves the problem with the figure (the car) but there are at least six other problems with the ground that to my eye are distracting and need attention. The light post in the upper left; the left over tops of threes sticking out above the hood line between the lamp post and the first tree; the two trees; the branch sticking out of the upper right of the frame; the metal frame(?) between the car and the right edge of the frame and the very tight space between the bottom of the frame and the headlight on the left of the image. All are easy fixes. I've made the changes on a downloaded copy and it looks much more cohesive ... at least to my eye. Unfortunately, I don't know if I can upload the image with the comment.
WARNING: If you plan to make a habit of photographing cars, dust spots can be a nightmare in post. Carry a soft cloth with you. If the owner is present, ask them if they would mind wiping down the area you want to shoot or if they would mind you doing so. If you do it, be super careful and respectful of their baby.
Posted by: JohnW | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 01:04 PM
I taught an evening photography class at our local Junior College for 15 years and I had no trouble finding examples of what not to do right in my own files. I told the class that it is the only reason to save bad photos.
Posted by: Leland Davis | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 01:12 PM
Obvious! Not getting someone to cut down the tree behind and obscuring the Spirit of Ecstasy. Nothing says "Rolls Royce" more than needless, extravagant gestures.
Mike
Posted by: Mike Chisholm | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 01:28 PM
My eye was drawn to the headlight brush.
Posted by: speed | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 01:41 PM
Still was not a color field painter.
[I think a number of authorities would disagree with you on that, although you could also call him an abstract expressionist. A brief quote from the Wikipedia article on "Color field": "Still was considered one of the foremost Color Field painters...." --Mike]
Posted by: Lynn | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 01:58 PM
Sam Abell calls that, and similar considerations, "microcomposition".
Posted by: John | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 02:19 PM
Mike,
You sucked us in nicely, with your first example. It took me about ten seconds to zero in on the hood ornament. This was it. I felt smart. I expect most of us got it with equal ease.
Posted by: Allan Ostling | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 02:24 PM
Thanks for reposting this Mike! Unawareness of foreground to background relationships is by far my biggest compositional pet peeve. And making clear what is the subject is only the first step: the figure-ground relationship can be an amazing tool for telling a story too (or making up a story where one does not exist for you propagandists).
And if I'm in an ungenerous mood, I'd also add that ignorance of this principle is mainly responsible for photographers' obsession with shallow depth-of-field ultra fast lenses.
Posted by: Andre Y | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 02:44 PM
Naa, no!
Maybe not Anna missed the perspective, but Mike missed the moral of the image. If you visually extract the donned aphrodite-like, innocent-looking and angel-like figurine from the front section of a RR, then you may come to recognize its primitively agressive truck-like base-character. Assuming that the perspective of the image was chosen deliberately, converts the image into a visualized refusal of capitalism.
Different cultures cultivate different mindsets.
Yours Kleks
[It's a fair point, Kleks. Sometimes things that look like mistakes are not mistakes, but are done deliberately for specific reasons. I think this was just carelessness, but of course I could be wrong. --Mike]
Posted by: Klemens Ekschmitt | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 03:12 PM
"What basic mistake did the photographer make in the following picture?"
They took another damn picture of a damn automobile.
If you click through the link to my web site, you will find more bad photographs than you can shake a stick at. Knock yourself out.
Posted by: David Smith | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 03:44 PM
If you want a source for really bad photo's just go to pretty much any real estate for sale site and look for low to moderately priced homes. You will find a huge number of poorly composed, under and over exposed, out of focus, off color, wrong time of day, etc.
And there are also ones that make you stop and think why in the world would they include that in the listing photos? Things like the agent or photographer in a mirror, a shade drawn in a bedroom window, but there's a shadow of a man outside the window. A couple of cats in the front yard making kittens.
Posted by: Robert Harshman | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 04:33 PM
Speaking of tai chi, photographers could do worse than adopt the practice. Besides the well-known benefits, it enhances overall balance and stability, body control, and strength and flexibility in the lower body--just what you need to do the compositional dance Mike describes with less shakiness or fatigue. That dance comes in handy in many hand-held photography situations, not just street photography, and requires more strength and endurance than many people realize.
Posted by: robert e | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 04:33 PM
Hi Mike - Feel free to use any of my photographs from my website for your examples. I have no aspirations to become a pro photographer, and no illusions about the quality of my work. If anything is really good, it's probably by accident. I just love having fun taking photos, and if I am happy with my own stuff I'll print it or load it up to the website. I'd especially be interested in seeing details of where I went wrong with B&W photos (some on film, but most shot as B&W jpegs in-camera). I assure you, you won't offend me.
Posted by: Ernie Van Veen | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 04:40 PM
Mike, I think the photographer was far more interested in the ultra fancy headlamp "grooming" brush than the hood ornament. That being said, thanks for the other examples - especially the pink pole and the Clyfford Still painting
Posted by: Kwesi Wlson | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 04:57 PM
I got it! I got it! Full marks to me.
Posted by: David | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 05:09 PM
Thanks, Mike. I love this direction for your posts. In my experience, one of the biggest complications in the ground in a photo is a bright area that pulls the eye from the figure. In many photos, this can be a bit of sky that sneaks in at the edge or top of a photo. This may be less of a problem for those who shoot primarily color (I compose primarily in black and white), but I can't count the times I have moved on from a composition because I could not "figure out" (pun intended) this problem.
Posted by: Bill Poole | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 05:13 PM
“ I was puzzled by the fashion in interior decorating (in the Midwest at least) of putting a band of decorative wallpaper on the walls of a room up by the ceiling. Why in the world would you want to draw attention to the right-angle meeting of the wall and the ceiling?...”
Is that not merely some kind of vestigial evidence of the cultural attachment to the idea of a picture rail ?
Posted by: Nigel | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 06:04 PM
As two others (as of this writing) have pointed out, the subject...or figure...is the headlamp brush. In that case blending the hood ornament with the background tree works to diminish distraction. A better composition overall could have done even more - but damned if I’d want to be the one trying to come up with it on the fly.
Posted by: Michael | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 07:10 PM
The principal mistake with this picture is that its intention is unclear due to all the visual clutter pulling us in all directions.
I'm guessing that as the headlight brush is central it is likely what the photographer intended us to notice.
However, the lines of the photo send us off to the right and out of the picture. There are bright and distracting details, lines, patterns and colours everywhere all demanding our attention.
All of which adds up to a snapshot of something the photographer found interesting – in effect, a failure of photography.
Merely pointing a camera at interesting things does not by itself make for an interesting photograph.
Posted by: Adrian Malloch | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 07:15 PM
As someone who has been aiming at a fair amount of cars lately I actually picked out the mistake pretty quick.
Examining some of my shots I'll sometimes see a detail that should have been featured by using a closer perspective. Learning is forever.
Posted by: Mike Ferron | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 07:42 PM
Mike, Great article. I studied this concept when I took some photo courses at the local community college. Actually our teacher was great but this is a great reminder on the whole concept. Feel free to use any of my images from my flickr account for examples either good or bad. I have no pretense that any of my images are worthy of a museum show, but if they can be helpful for someone to learn the craft of photography, please use them. All the best Eric
Posted by: albert w erickson | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 08:53 PM
Foreground to background relationships are even more important in our times, with the preference for the wide-angle "look" and the higher depth of field that naturally comes with wider field of view lenses.
The problem is exacerbated in today's smartphone photography, with their 2 and 3mm focal length wide-angle lenses that keep almost everything in the frame near-perfectly-sharp, no matter where you focus.
In my parents' time, almost everyone used roll-film, and it was less of a problem. Shallower depth of field—in the smaller aperture but longer focal length fixed normal lenses common in those days in consumer cameras—partly made up for obvious mistakes such as the one in the example.
Not that you would have achieved that look with a Kodak 120 rollfilm consumer camera back in 1950.
Posted by: Mani Sitaraman | Friday, 13 December 2019 at 11:40 PM
also to note when tweaking camera position is that with close subjects and wide angle lenses a little movement can go a long way, with faraway subjects and long lenses not so much
Posted by: nicolas | Saturday, 14 December 2019 at 12:17 AM
Another reason to like rangefinder cameras with everything near to far is sharp in the viewfinder. Often that telephone pole growing out of someone's head isn't all that obvious through your f1.4 85mm SLR lens when your taking aperture is f8.
Opposite issue with cellphone cameras. The tremendous depth of field often allows incredible clutter in the background of many pictures.
Posted by: Tom Duffy | Saturday, 14 December 2019 at 10:51 AM
What I like more than photographic rules are artists that creatively debunk them. The figure/ground rule reminded me of John Baldessari’s series from the late 1960s where he interrupts the aesthetic intention associated with art and took pictures of things that were traditionally not believed to be worthy of art. His photographs and accompanying text were then applied to canvas with a photoemulsion technique that gave the resulting works a very rough unprofessional look. My favourite of this series is an image called “Wrong” below. Among the numerous “wrong” things about this photo that I can spot are the figure/ground problem, it is taken in mid-day, a boring suburban location, and it breaks the Ansel Adams edge rule. I love it dearly! Actually I found a reference to this work in one of your past articles.
https://4.bp.blogspot.com/-CHjBx7aPO88/TaLxET1NalI/AAAAAAAAAB4/EC3_XdPGa7w/s1600/wrong.jpg
Posted by: vytas narusevicius | Sunday, 15 December 2019 at 10:47 AM
Criag Tanner used to have a website 15 years ago with another guy, I'm sure the name was Michael Johnson. One thing they did was to have viewers send in photos for evaluation.
They never said something was wrong, it was always "in an ideal world"...
In an ideal world, you could have taken
a few steps forward at the edge of the
grand canyon to eliminate some obstruction.
Posted by: Tom Legrady | Monday, 16 December 2019 at 10:09 AM
Mike,
I give you blanket agreement for taking any of my photos on the web to illustrate a bad composition or bad whatever. I learn a lot from critiques. Thank you in advance.
Posted by: Animesh Ray | Monday, 16 December 2019 at 11:52 PM
Yeah, using actual people's photos as bad examples is chancy. When I was running the photo team back at the 1989 World Science Fiction Convention we did a daily meeting to show "the rushes" (film term borrowed for showing yesterday's still photo take), and I only used actual examples of the bad things too many photos had in them when I could find them in my own photos (and I told people the bad examples were mine).
Somebody, recently, I thought on TOP, said that classrooms are a much less risky place to use random bad examples from the real world, and I agree heartily. It doesn't seem to be anybody in this thread who said it, though.
Posted by: David Dyer-Bennet | Tuesday, 17 December 2019 at 08:30 PM